Eighteenth Day of School

In Writing today, we started the revision process. Revisions are completed in blue ink. Our process for narrative revisions is as follows:

1. Re-read
2. Ask:
• Is the story clear?
• Is it interesting?
• Is it complete?
3. If the the answer to any of these questions is 'no', then make additions/revisions where necessary.

Revisions may include, but may not be limited to, adding descriptions, adding quotations, making clarifications, and adding details.